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The Glass Orchard — Chapter One
Three reviewers have completed critiques on your opening chapter. Their most repeated note relates to pacing before the central discovery.
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Avery M.
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The opening exchange creates tension immediately. Consider giving Mara one stronger physical action before the voice responds.
Morgan R.
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The atmosphere is excellent. The greenhouse description could be shortened so the discovery happens sooner.